BetaForce Part Three
After rewriting it several times, I finally got Part Three finished and uploaded to DeviantArt. The address is http://tinyurl.com/24vy9n.
Now all six main protagonist characters have been introduced, the story should move a little quicker. Part Four should be done pretty quickly as the first bit was orginally part of Part Three but had to be cut to save space(an give me somewhere to start in Part Four)