BetaForce Update

Part Two is coming on nicely. its going to be a little bit longer than Part One, mainly due to the fact that it introduces the characters of Echo’s One to Four. Echo Five will be introduced in a future “issue” but will get mentioned in P2 to establish his existence. There will be less action in this part because its mainly a “talky” chapter to introduce the characters and the function of Echo Cell and BetaForce. I’m actually finding character interactions hard to write, and I’ve rewrote sections of P2 several times already. Its about 50% done at the moment and I hope to get it online by monday morning (UK Time).
On a related note, I’ve made a few minor edits to Part One. These are mainly corrections of typos and grammatical errors. Proofreading is not one of my strong points so I will have to try harder on that. I may use some text-to-speech software to have the computer read Part Two back to me. That should make it easier to spot any mistakes.

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Suspect is a Caucasian male, approximately 5'7" in height with blue eyes and brown hair. Last known place of residence in Manchester, UK WARNING: Suspect is in possession of number of swords, knives, firearms and other weaponry as well as body armour. He should be considered armed and dangerous.

Posted on Saturday, July 7, 2007, in BetaForce. Bookmark the permalink. Leave a comment.

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